Re: Re: Chapter 1 of "The Blonde and the Brunette" is up!

by MrDave

The only thing that bothers me is the use of 'dissent' (Meaning to hold or express opinions that are at variance with those previously, commonly, or officially expressed) in place of the word 'descent' (meaning the origin or background of a person in terms of family or nationality)


Once is forgivable, but you've done it in three stories now.